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Critiques and ideas needed!
Mar 8^th, 2006 at 4:29pm

Hey! I need your critiques (and ideas).

I designed/uploaded a personal website some days ago, and I would really like critiques and ideas... and, if somebody is really bored, I would REALLY appreciate a correction of the english version of the site (sure there are lots of mistakes I do not find).

http://naryart.webcindario.com

Thanks in advance!!

3 erasers + some string + a bored me = my funny first but still working bola.

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siguy Interfector Viris Spurii Offline si vis pacem para bellum Posts: 1714 connecticut Gender:	Re: Critiques and ideas needed! Reply #1 - Mar 8^th, 2006 at 5:30pm looks really good! i listen to system of a down as well. good pics. all compuiter, huh? i usualy draw on paper, then scan into photoshop. then again, i don't have a tablet.
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narya Junior Member Offline Para nacer hay que destruir un mundo Posts: 57 The Islands of the Ba'lé Yaroh Gender:	Re: Critiques and ideas needed! Reply #2 - Mar 8^th, 2006 at 5:38pm I got the tablet this Christmas, before it was all "mouse"... And yep, all colouring is digital... but I do lots of outlines (and let's not talk about sketches) on paper. It's easier than the tablet. Glad you liked it!
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bigkahuna past-moderator Offline Posts: 3894 Delaware, USA Gender:	Re: Critiques and ideas needed! Reply #3 - Mar 8^th, 2006 at 8:36pm I think your site is very nice. You are a very talented woman. Are you going to do any slingers?
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narya Junior Member Offline Para nacer hay que destruir un mundo Posts: 57 The Islands of the Ba'lé Yaroh Gender:	Re: Critiques and ideas needed! Reply #4 - Mar 8^th, 2006 at 8:38pm At least, I'm going to try... but I'd need photoreferences Suppose this is the best place to ask for them. So, does anybody have any pics that I could use as photoreference? (Bambi eyes)
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bigkahuna past-moderator Offline Posts: 3894 Delaware, USA Gender:	Re: Critiques and ideas needed! Reply #5 - Mar 8^th, 2006 at 8:40pm Thanks
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Re: Critiques and ideas needed!
Reply #6 - Mar 8^th, 2006 at 8:59pm

Very cool narya! I'll spread the word for you and have my friends visit your site. It would be great to see a photoshop picture of slingers! Please let us know when you have one on your site.

There are many photos of slingers in the gallery section of this site, especially the media gallery, You may find pictures of palestinain slinging in war zones Shocked

. Check them out, they might be good reference for you.

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narya Junior Member Offline Para nacer hay que destruir un mundo Posts: 57 The Islands of the Ba'lé Yaroh Gender:	Re: Critiques and ideas needed! Reply #7 - Mar 8^th, 2006 at 9:03pm Thanks! Going to check them!
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bigkahuna past-moderator Offline Posts: 3894 Delaware, USA Gender:	Re: Critiques and ideas needed! Reply #8 - Mar 8^th, 2006 at 9:05pm I can't wait to see your pictures. I bet they will be great!
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narya Junior Member Offline Para nacer hay que destruir un mundo Posts: 57 The Islands of the Ba'lé Yaroh Gender:	Re: Critiques and ideas needed! Reply #9 - Mar 8^th, 2006 at 10:22pm Look what you've made me do Any problems with anatomy, pose, movement, anything?
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bigkahuna past-moderator Offline Posts: 3894 Delaware, USA Gender:	Re: Critiques and ideas needed! Reply #10 - Mar 8^th, 2006 at 10:29pm I am very impressed. Did you just fire this off or did you have this picture laying around already?
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narya Junior Member Offline Para nacer hay que destruir un mundo Posts: 57 The Islands of the Ba'lé Yaroh Gender:	Re: Critiques and ideas needed! Reply #11 - Mar 8^th, 2006 at 10:34pm I've just done it now. I looked for the photos on the gallery, and there was one that actually looked good enough to try to use it... and that's the result. Well, this is just a "sketch", the colour version will be (probably) better... and will take more time and effort.
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bigkahuna past-moderator Offline Posts: 3894 Delaware, USA Gender:	Re: Critiques and ideas needed! Reply #12 - Mar 8^th, 2006 at 10:40pm I am amazed that you were able to draw such a fine picture sooo fast! W0w
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bigkahuna past-moderator Offline Posts: 3894 Delaware, USA Gender:	Re: Critiques and ideas needed! Reply #13 - Mar 8^th, 2006 at 10:57pm I also like the way you sign your name in Elvish (Sindarin)?
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Re: Critiques and ideas needed!
Reply #14 - Mar 8^th, 2006 at 11:00pm

You can draw faster than we could sling!

narya the "quickest draw" among slingers! Wink

I think the picture was very good. Packed with action. One can feel the slinger moving her feet and swinging the rock at the same time waiting for the right moment to let fly. If I have to be ruthless, i'd say her facial expression seems a bit odd. Is she in a confrontation? or is she just praticing? is she skilled? calm?or focused? I know what she is doing but I can't make out what she is "feeling".

but Like I said i am being very picky and as a sketch I am sure such detail shouldn't be dwelled upon (may be i should have kept my month shut) Lips Sealed

. I give you 12/10!

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