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Chris
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Oct 11th, 2005 at 11:30pm
 
Here is the new slinging.org intro (from the first page):

What is a sling?
The sling is perhaps man’s first projectile weapon. It generally consists of two cords and pouch. The cords are held in your hand and a projectile is placed in the pouch. The length of the cords provide greater mechanical than one’s arms. Projectiles can be thrown over 1500 feet (450m) at speeds exceeding 250 miles per hour (400 kph). There are many historical accounts explaining how the sling could out-range and out-fire the bow, the slings main competitor. There are also dozens of sources noting the amazing accuracy of this weapon in trained hands. Although use of the sling diminished after the fall of the Roman Empire, the weapon’s supremacy as the premier, personal, long-range weapon was not supplanted until the 15th century. Ultimately, changes in society, technology, and military tactics made slings ineffective in large-scale combat. The sling continues to be used in various smaller conflicts and by enthusiasts to this day.

The sling is unique in that the movement of the weapon is merely an extension of the user’s body. The power and accuracy of the weapon is not by technological means, but rather the user’s skill. The connection between slinger and sling is an intimate bond, and one that is hard to duplicate in modern weaponry.


It's meant to be short and sweet, but touch on a few topics that might capture the readers interest.  I'd love to hear some comments (content or grammatical). 

Chris
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Reply #1 - Oct 12th, 2005 at 1:28am
 
I don't know Chris.....ditch the big fancy words and it would appeal to a much wider audience.




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I think it is right on target.  I hearken to the inclusivity of generous, realistic numbers for speed and range....and the wispish, connotative challenge for the reader to discover for his or herself, the intrinsic appeal this primitive implement can convey.



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Reply #2 - Oct 12th, 2005 at 2:08am
 
I think that's very good, Chris.
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Reply #3 - Oct 12th, 2005 at 9:23am
 
I agree with tint, that's very good!
You're done a good job making something that captures the readers interest too Wink

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Reply #4 - Oct 12th, 2005 at 10:05am
 
It rocks Grin
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Reply #5 - Oct 12th, 2005 at 10:52am
 
Looks fine to me,  I don't think the words are too big .
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Reply #6 - Oct 12th, 2005 at 11:33am
 
works for me :-)
But then I don't think I've ever read the existing intro all the way through (sorry, but it's true :-)
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Reply #7 - Oct 12th, 2005 at 1:41pm
 
FunSlinger, some good corrections there.  Especially the mechanical advantage one (a cut and paste error)!

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Reply #8 - Oct 12th, 2005 at 7:14pm
 
Nice work Chris!
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