David,
The position of your legs intrigues me. I guess that you start body rotation by the swing of the left leg and then you rotate on the right one. Am I right?
My way is a bit different. I place my legs on direction of the shoot, it gives me a good support on the ground. It is stable and makes possible the sudden start of the hips rotation which I initiate by the push of the right leg and the detorton of right knee to inside. Just it begins my shot in the proper moment. I'm not sure you read my last post in the topic with the pictures, or mybe I was unclear.
The second thing I noticed on your photo is the position of the wrist when the sling is just over your head. I can't imagine how you are able to make the comfortable stoke from this position. My palm is turned rather upward in this moment (look at my 2 first pictures, please).
My arm and wrist rotate more far from the head, when the sling is in lowest point my arm is even more straight. It gives the more spacious whip, that is important for the long sling. It's just the key.
I don't think I'm expert and I'm not teaching or criticizing you. Just my observations. Maybe I'm wrong. I would be happy if someone gives me some advices.
Jurek, who need a lot advices too